2016考研英语:小作文预测之建议信
【摘要】随着2016考研英语大纲的发布,作文预测也进入了如火如荼的阶段。小作文方面很有可能会考到建议信,因此建议大家对于建议信多加关注。在此就建议信给大家一些备考策略。了解更多猛戳
作文的提高除了积累语料素材之外,还要多多加以练习,只有在练习中才能发现自己的语法错误以及段落安排上的问题,还有自己到底是词汇上还是句子上的欠缺。下边是一篇关于建议信的习作,希望大家能够从中有所收获。
Dear President,
I am Liming,a college student of our university.I am writing this letter to submit some suggestions about the problems of our canteen which ①leads ②to so many students complain about.
First of all,the distance between canteen and library is so far.It causes inconvenience for those who ③like study in library ④all one day.Second,food security in the build is very suspectable.People in ⑤many ⑥mount have always found ⑦fair and others in their ⑧foods when they were having a meal.Third,the ⑨sense of food is inedible and the price ⑩of one is expensive.
All in all, I hope you will find my recommendations useful to improve life quality of students.Thank you for hearing my suggestions.
Yours sincerely
Liming
备注:
1、是问题的定语从句,问题是复数,所以为lead,不加s
2、导致lead to doing;lead sb. To do .所以这里改为lead many students to complain about.
3、Like to study 想要学习在图书馆;like studying 喜欢在图书馆学习
4、一整天,all day long
5、把many 改为certain更合适一些
6、数量amount
7、hair
8、food
9、flavor
10、去掉of one
对于基础薄弱的考生,无论英语一还是英语二,长难句不会写但更要注意的是千万别犯一些简单的语法错误。本来背诵的长难句增彩的,如果有简单的语法错误会让阅卷老师大跌眼镜的,因此尽量避免简单的语法错误。除了要保证语法上的正确性,小作文特别需要注意的是开头结尾的套话,这个需要大家平时积累,开头结尾的套话一方面能够保证自己的作文没有跑题,另外,这些套话也是遵循书信的写作规范。抛砖引玉,希望大家除了在建议信下功夫,其他书信格式也都要有所涉猎和积累。
接下来需要大家在作文板块上投入大量时间,因为作文还是比较容易短时间内提高分数的。基础好的可以多整理些属于自己的好句子;基础不好的可以训练自己避免犯一些低级的语法错误,在此基础上再进行句子的润色。祝大家考研路上马到功成。
(实习编辑:史若阳)