Describe an achievement that you are proud of

You should say:

What it was

How it was made

What difficulties have you encountered during the process

Why you are proud of this achievement

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成功减肥的经历

高分语段：Now I’m not only as slim as I used to be, but I’m also fit enough. And I’m genuinely proud of my achievement. I should say it was hard to change my habits, my diet and my lifestyle, and at some point I was about to give up because all those activities were really time consuming. But I didn’t, thank God, though I was facing a lot of difficulties. Another thing that makes me feel inordinately proud of myself is that I achieved great results without anybody’s help. I just read blogs and forums, used a lot of online resources, but it was I that decided what to do with myself. This is something I never thought I could do. You can’t even imagine how much effort I put in achieving this result. I would even say I was fighting the battle of my life. And I won.

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创办的网站DailyStep在麦克米伦字典的“爱英语”奖中被提名为“最佳网站”，世界各地的人通过在这个网站学习提高了英语。

高分语段：However, the thing that makes me the most proud of all is the thought that so many people around the world have improved their English using my method.

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在上班途中送一位车祸伤者去医院，及时拯救了他的生命，做好事没留名，但留在了口语考试现场。

高分语段：I felt sad for the man. He might have started his work or to attend an important appointment or for any other purposes. But he could not reach his destination. And it was a troublesome matter for him. However, being able to help him was a great feeling for me. To put it in a simple word, it was fulfilling.

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代替受伤的朋友主持演讲节目。活动进行很成功。

高分语段：I became very nervous because I had never hosted any event before but I respected the faith of my teacher and with the help of my friend, I prepared myself a night before. Next day, I was feeling butterflies in my stomach when the event started but honestly speaking, the whole event went smooth when I stood on the podium. After the event, I took a sigh of relief and when my teachers and friends complimented me, I felt on top of the world.