2018年11月3日雅思写作考试回忆及解析

TASK 1

题型：静态表格

作文主题：6个国家在3个领域的水量使用

写作要点：本题是静态图，写作要点要按照静态来挑选，注意要和动态图写作进行区分，一定不要写趋势。在信息挑选方面，极值、分数倍数等信息的筛选是必要的，难点或者考生容易忽略的地方是句型的替换，和单词同义词的使用，大家可以用不同的句型来表达同一个内容进行训练。

TASK 2

It is shown that many criminals have a low level of education. Some people argue that the best way to reduce crime is to educate criminals in prison to help them find jobs when they leave prison. Do you agree or disagree?

题目分析：

题目类型：犯罪类

提问方式：同意与否类

Crime from the juvenile to the adults, obviously, has become an serious social problem, which cannot be ignored. Gradually, more people focus on the future of criminal released from the prison, and believe that to provide them educational opportunities does help the reduction of crime; as for me, I am an advocate of this idea.

As the major reason of high crime rate in today’s society, low education level has been blamed. People without receiving enough education would be attempted easily, and do not have the equal and excellent skills to compete with others when looking for a job; besides, lacking sufficient moral knowledge to distinguish right from wrong contributes to go astray on their way to pursue the goals. It is worth providing the prisoners, especially committing minor crimes, with education opportunities before free, which not only can give them another chance to learn some practical skills and accumulate certain knowledge to find a job and start again after the sentence, but also decline the risk that they would turn to crime again.

On the other hand, educational opportunities in prison cannot be the universal solution of all the problems the prisoners face. The huge life pressure and the attitude from other citizens could lead them to go back to the old lifestyle, or even cause more serious problems to both the society and the individuals financially and mentally. However, no one can doubt the function of education as the basic mean to provide people and the society a brighter future; thus, though education cannot solve all the problems at once, it is necessary for a long time.

In conclusion, in spite of many causes in high crime rate, our society should realize the importance of education, and give all the criminals the second chance to do something right and have a better development in the future life.