用过渡词阐述原因，并用例子、评论进行论证

启：first, at present, first of all, at the first place, on the one hand, for one thing, to begin with,

承：Second, On the other hand, in addition, additionally, moreover, what is more, furthermore, besides, meanwhile, in the mean time, in other words, more importantly,

合：last but not least, finally, eventually, at last, in the end

高频词汇的替换使用

表明：It shows to us that (It indicates that/ It reveals that/It reveals that/It reflects that/It demonstrates that/It conveys the idea that /It suggest that/It implies that/It illustrates that/It throw light on sth that/)

重要的：Important (be of great importance, essential, fundamental, vital, significant, crucial, play a key role in doing sth, should be taken seriously,

我认为：I think( I guess, I suppose, I assume. I believe, I presume, I insist that, I maintain that, I hold it self-evident that, I argue that, in my opinion, as I can see it, as far as I am concerned , as far as I can see, I hold the view that, in my eyes)

很多：a great many of of/more/an increasing number of/numerous/dozens of/ loads of

语言突破

句子翻译

1. 高一时我数学成绩不好。

2.在最近的数学考试中我取得了好成绩。

3.父亲上周从美国回来，带回来不少的英文书和磁带。

4.我想邀请你参加我们班的英语晚会。

5.请你在晚会上讲一讲英语阅读的问题，好吗?

6.同学和老师将表演话剧，唱英文歌。

7.我们为自己的学校感到骄傲。

8.中国是一个有着五千年悠久历史的古老国家。

9.英语已经成为了世界性语言。

10.重要的书籍多数都是用英语出版的。

11.懂英语的人可以加深对世界各民族的了解。

12.她遇到的那位先生很有礼貌地向她打了招呼。

13.我丢的表找到了。

14.这是我见过的最漂亮的校园。

15.我们头一件要做的事情就是相信自己。

<常见错误>

1 主谓不一致

When a beggar have enough money, he can use them to buy what he want.

2 冠词误用

My father is doctor and he likes to play the football.

3 指代不明

The old man lives alone in a big house and he must look after myself.

4 词性误用

They without food and gave up at last.

5 使用赘词

Yesterday I returned back the books to the library.

His performance approached to perfection.

Because it was raining hard, so we didn’t go to the park.

Sam was the policeman (whom) I asked him for help at the station.

6 措词不当

After having supper, the children began to speak stories.

He was healthy like an ox. He lifted the heavy box easily.

7 修饰语错位

They had enough grain to be stored, so they wanted to find a house which would be enough big as their storehouse.

8 句子不完整

With the development of science and technology, we can know the world at home in many ways. For example, by TV, by radio, by internet and so on.

9 语句不连贯

At the age of seven, his grandfather died.

Water, it is very important and no it we cannot live.

10 套用母语

He is hard working. You will find them in his book room.