2019年公共英语五级作文范文类型:问题+理由+建议
四、问题+理由+建议
题目范例:
It is generally acknowledged that families are now not as close as they used to be. Give possible reasons and your recommendations.
There is much discussion nowadays as to whether or not the relation-ship between family members is as close as before. Diverse contributing factors can be identified. In the following, I would like to present my point of view.
Great changes have taken place in family life along with the development of society. One of them is that the once-extended family tends to become smaller and smaller. Many children have to leave their parents at an early age to study or work elsewhere. As time passes, children become emotionally estranged from their parents.
Compared with the past, social competition is becoming increasingly fierce. People are urged to concentrate their efforts upon work, so that they can achieve success, or at least a good standard of living. As a result, they can’t afford to spend their leisure hours with their families. The importance of bonds of kinship is gradually fading from their minds.
In addition, the availability of various kinds of recreational facilities also diverts people from enjoying chats with the members of their families. Their free time is mostly occupied by watching TV, surfing the Internet or playing video games. They come to lose interest in communicating with the other members of their families.
In view of such alienation within families, I do believe that urgent steps must be taken. For members of families who live away from one another, regular contact on the phone can bring them the care that they need. Family reunions on holidays or other important occasions can make a difference as well. For those living together, it is a good idea to take some time off work or recreation periods to spend more time with each other. In the final analysis, a close family relationship can surely be maintained as long as we realize the significant role it plays in our lives and attach importance to it.
解析:
本文行文流畅,结构完整,语言表达得体。
首段开门见山,一共只有三句话。第一、二句用自己的话简单明了地交待了题目所提供的现象:现在家庭成员之间的关系不如以前亲密。第三句话说明写作目的,引出下文。
主体段落说明出现这一现象的理由,每个理由作为一个分支观点单独成一段,分别谈到家庭生活的变化、社会竞争的激烈和多种多样的娱乐设施这几点原因。
因为recommendations的题型要求考生针对题目所提供的现象或观点提出建议,本文结尾段针对这一现象分两种情况提出建议,不住在一起的家庭成员应当做些什么,住在一起的家庭成员又该做些什么。
从语言角度来说,本文所使用的表达方式很符合文章的风格,同时也充分展示了作者〈考生)对英语这种语言的掌握程度,例如:Various contributing factors can be identified这一句显然要比There are various factors这种简单的英语精彩许多,考生在复习备考时就应当经常模仿使用这些常用的句型。