考前提醒:这些英语作文的隐形错误你要注意
摘要:在最后的备考阶段,各位考研er们很多时候只注意抓大的要点复习,却忽视了很多细节方面的问题,最后可能造成感觉自己答题还不错,可是分数却不高的情况。这些英语作文中的隐形错误你要注意。
►指代方面的错误
在使用代词it,he,this,that,which,one等时,前文中应出现明确的先行词。
如:“Since we cannot know what particular bit of knowledge a child will need in the future,it is senseless to force him to learn it.”,这句话中,him和it这两个代词都有明确的先行词,分别是a child和knowledge,因此句子的含义非常清楚。
可是,不少学生在使用这些代词时,虽然自己很清楚它们指代的是什么,但在作文中却没有交代清楚,结果这些代词非但没有使行文简洁,反而造成了意思上的模糊,让阅卷老师不知所云。
误:Sometimes teachers will inform students of the heavy burden they have to bear.
正:Sometimes the teacher will inform students of the heavy burden he has to bear.
►修饰方面的错误
修饰语应紧靠被修饰的成分,并和它形成正确的逻辑关系。如果修饰语的位置不妥当,就会造出模棱两可的病句。
误:To keep the air clean, we must move the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside.
正:To keep the air clean, we must move the factories to the countryside if they give off poisonous gases.
►一致方面的错误
在一个句子内部或紧邻的两三个句子之间,要保持时态、人称、数量的一致。
误:Whether one enjoys or resents advertisements, we are actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.
正:Whether we enjoy or resent advertisements, we are actually bombarded with them every hour of the day.
►平行结构方面的错误
这里专指语态、比较级、非谓语形式、冠词用法、可数名词和不可数名词、不定代词单复数以及时态等错误。
1、误:Narrow streets easily cause to happen many traffic accidents.
正:narrow streets easily cause many traffic accidents. (to happen)
误:A great change has been taken place since then.
正:A great change has taken place since then.
误:But it may occur some new problems.
正:But some new problems may occur/arise.
误:Opportunities are only belonged to those who work hard.
正:Opportunities only belong to those who work hard.
2、误:The pace of our modern life is getting more faster and faster.
正:The pace of our modern life is getting faster and faster.
误:Electricity is the most important power in our daily life than other kinds of power.
正:Electricity is the most important power in our daily life.
误:Thus our city will be greatly beautiful than it is now.
正:Thus our city will be far more beautiful than it is now.
►断句方面的错误
一句句子没有结束,又开始新的一句,结果造成句子结构不全,这就成为断句。
误:TV becomes an important part in our daily life. Because we cannot live without it.
正:TV becomes an important part in our daily life,because we cannot live without it.
►连词方面的错误
作文中缺少必要的连词,或错用连词的现象也比较普遍。
误:One should improve his English,one should overcome difficulties in studies.
正:If one wants to improve his English,he should overcome difficulties in studies.
►搭配方面的错误
学生作文中用词搭配方面的错误也占有较大比例。曾经在一次作文阅卷中,近千篇作文在表达“上海交通越来越拥挤”这个意思时,几乎没有一篇用 heavier,大多数人用的是The traffic in Shanghai is getting more and more crowded,而traffic是不能与crowded搭配的。
1、误:However the speed of a car is much faster than that of a bicycle.
正:However the speed of a car is much higher than that of a bicycle.
2、误:In the past the price of milk was so expensive that most families could not afford it.
正:In the past the price of milk was so high that most families couldn’t afford it.
由此可见,要提高对词语搭配的驾驭能力,除了要在平时的阅读过程中多积累,还需要克服中文中诸如“速度快”、“价格贵”、“学习知识”、“人减少”等搭配的影响,避免写出look book或see book这样的笑话来。
►误用方面
学生作文中对词语的误用也相当普遍,误用词语不仅不能准确地表达作者的意思,而且也会闹出笑话。
1、误:With the industrious development,there is a great need for different kinds of energy.
正:With the industrial development,there is a great need for different kinds of energy.
2、误:Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which effect our daily life.
正:Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which affect our daily life.
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