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1.现如今大学生压力过大，过激行为频发

2.大学生压力过大的原因

3.如何解决

【参考答案】

[范文评点]

　　How to Deal With Pressure?

(1) Nowadays, since competition becomes more and more severe, college students are facing great pressure in their study and job-hunting. It is not uncommon to hear that some college students (2) commit suicide or some extreme behaviors.

(3) Many factors contribute to their pressure. First, academic　achievements are given too much emphasis. A lot of things, such as gaining scholarship or being accommodated for further study, depend on one’s achievements in study. Therefore, many students feel depressed when doing badly in examinations. This depression which (4) accumulates little by little may finally destroy a person. Second, competition from job-hunting　becomes heavier and heavier as a result of the negative effect of global financial crisis.

To help college students in dealing with their pressure, the following(5) ways may be adopted. First, students should be guided to (6) cultivate correct attitude towards academic achievements. Second, students are supposed to communicate more with their friends or teachers to (7) comfort their depressed mood. Third, they can do some social practice or voluntary work in their spare time to add to their career opportunities. In this way, they could have more faith in their future.

[审题]

本文是一篇六级考试中常见的议论文，要求考生就“如何应对压力”这个话题展开论述。根据题目要求，考生应首先陈述现如今大学生压力过大这一情况，然后提出大学生压力过大的原因，最后提出解决办法。

[写作提纲]

一、现如今大学生压力过大，过激行为频发(great pressure，commit suicide，extreme behavior)

二、造成大学生压力过大的原因

1.高校仅以学业成果衡量学生(academic achievements，too much emphasis)

2.受金融危机影响，就业压力大(job-hunting，negative effect)

三、解决办法

1.摆正心态(cultivate correct attitude)

2.多与朋友及师长交流(more communication)

3.利用课余时间参加社会实践及义务劳动(spare time，social practice，voluntary work)

[本题分数]： 106.0 分

　　【答案解析】

　　[解析]

(1)开篇点题，指出当今大学生压力过大，过激行为频发。

(2)commit suicide“自杀”;extreme behavior“极端行为”。

(3)contribute to“促成，造就”。

(4)accumulate“积累”。

(5)adopt ways to do“采取方法做某事”。

(6)cultivate correct attitude towards“培养对„„的正确态度”。

(7)comfort depressed mood“排解抑郁心情”。